Design Research Dissertation Assignment 1 / Draft Dissertation
29 Aug 2023 - 15 Oct 2023/ Week 1 - Week 7
Final Draft Dissertation
Week 1
Specific Feedback: -
General Feedback : Recap on the previous critical review and complete the matrix for better
Leem Sejin / 0362419
Design Research Dissertation / Bachelor of Design (Honour) in Creative Media
Assignment 1 - Draft Dissertation
LECTURE
Design Research Dissertation / Bachelor of Design (Honour) in Creative Media
Assignment 1 - Draft Dissertation
LECTURE
Week 1
Writing a dissertationWeek 2
Write a literature review
Week 3
Methodology section of dissertationWeek 4
Result & DiscussionWeek 6
Dissertation–Conclusion, Introduction, AbstractINSTRUCTION
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Week 1
Before we start with the draft dissertation, we are tasked to start with
building Literature Matrix based on the critical review that we done last
semester. This helps us to overview the content of the articles, and easier to
select sub-title for literature review section.
Fig 1.1 Literature matrix
Fig 1.2 Literature Review pdf
After the tutorial, I have finalised the the title into ' Discovery of Quality
Sound Effect for Low Budget Animation production"
Draft Dissertation progress
Fig 1.3 Draft Ver 1 pdf
Fig 1.4 Draft Ver 2 pdf
This round, I added the diagram for Methodology and Discussion section for better understanding and explanation,
Final Draft Dissertation
Fig 1.5 Final Draft Dissertation pdf
FEEDBACK
Week 1
Specific Feedback: -
General Feedback : Recap on the previous critical review and complete the matrix for better
visualization.
Week 2
Specific Feedback : 2 more main titles for literature review
Week 3
General Feedback : use appropriate verb for literature review, avoid conclusion in every section
Specific Feedback : Need introduction of the new techniques (foley sound, MIDI), do not need to put a full name when citing the author, use a variety of verbs other than ‘according’.
Week 4
General feedback : Use connectivity words( subsequently, in contrast),figure numbers; divided in sections. Consistency in writing ( either american or british)
Specific feedback : introduction needs to be more elaborated to support your study. For visual analysis, I need to add interpretation and citation to avoid bias.
Week 5
General Feedback: For Questionnaire, list down the questions and separate the answers
Specific Feedback: I can add the videos or soundtrack for the diagram.
Week 6
No tutorial
Specific Feedback : 2 more main titles for literature review
Week 3
General Feedback : use appropriate verb for literature review, avoid conclusion in every section
Specific Feedback : Need introduction of the new techniques (foley sound, MIDI), do not need to put a full name when citing the author, use a variety of verbs other than ‘according’.
Week 4
General feedback : Use connectivity words( subsequently, in contrast),figure numbers; divided in sections. Consistency in writing ( either american or british)
Specific feedback : introduction needs to be more elaborated to support your study. For visual analysis, I need to add interpretation and citation to avoid bias.
Week 5
General Feedback: For Questionnaire, list down the questions and separate the answers
Specific Feedback: I can add the videos or soundtrack for the diagram.
Week 6
No tutorial
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