Advanced Typography Task 2 / Key Artwork and Collateral
15 Sep 2023 - 15 Oct 2023 / Week 4 - Week 7
Leem Sejin / 0362419
Advanced Typography / Bachelor of Design (Honour) in Creative Media
Task 2 - Key Artwork and Collateral
Refer to
Exercise
Task 2A Key artwork
For this task, we have to use 4-5 letters from our names to create a logo.
Fortunately, my name is just 5 letters, so I decided to use "S","E","J","I","N".
Mr Vinod said I could play with the letters as the solution of completing the
puzzle pieces.
Using the two explorations,
For the reference font, I used
Titilium Web Block
font because the font is block and ideal for puzzle pieces. I tested it out by
placing the letters into
Fig 1.25 Key Animation Ver 2 (15/10/2023)
Week 7
REFLECTION
Experience
When I create the key art works, I need to present well about my thoughts
to appeal the audience. Hence, I need to understand my designs well and
dissolve the idea into the design. Presenting my ideas was quit difficult
I borrowed this book because it shows different logo from famous company
brand and show its developing process.
In this book, I found some brand logo that can be seen around in the
grocery shop, and I did not know that there are many development until
today. For example, the first "Perrier" letterforms are arranged on the
curved baseline, shape of arch to work well for circular paper label.
When I read this, I didn't aware of the surface of the product when I do
Key Artwork instead I only think about the flat surface.
Leem Sejin / 0362419
Advanced Typography / Bachelor of Design (Honour) in Creative Media
Task 2 - Key Artwork and Collateral
LECTURE
INSTRUCTION
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Week 3
Before I start, I did some research in the pinterest to find out how do actual
professional designers create the logo. The keyword for the research was
cursive because I find that cursive design is the most common in the
logo design.
Fig 1.2 Idea sketch Ver 1 (18/9/2023)
While I sketching the ideas, all the designs are not represent myself, hence I
start with mindmap, to listed out my characteristic
Fig 1.3 MindMap (18/9/2023)
When I write down my personality, I like two key points;
overthinking, like to listen music, and get puzzled whenever I start with
new project.
Fig 1.3 Idea sketch Ver 2 (18/9/2023)
- Overthinking : Infinite logo to describe endless thinking
- Music Note : Describe my love in music
- Puzzle pieces : Puzzled mindset
I did further research on the typeface design. This time , my key word is
angular and rectangular shape logo
Personally, I like the puzzle piece idea, because it is direct and easily
recognised by the viewer. In Adobe Illustrator, I did rough digitalisation. I
used the font Futura Std as a reference because this font does not have
any contrast in width.
Week 4
I explored puzzle designs in two ways:
- Create the letters from the square
- Develop the existing font into puzzle pieces
Fig 1.4 Idea Exploration 1 (22/9/2023)
For the first exploration, the overall design looks like puzzle pieces and
the size of the letters are same, however, the readability of the
letter 'N' is poor. Hence, I decided to refine the existing font.
Fig 1.5 Idea Exploration 2 (22/9/2023)
For the second exploration, I used Futra Std as a reference
because the font is straight and consistent.
Out of four ideas, I decided to work on second layout.
Fig. 1.4 Placement of the font (22/9/2023)
Fig. 1.5(22/9/2023)
Fig. 1.6 Extracted Puzzle pieces (22/9/2023)
Fig. 1.7 Extracted Puzzle pieces (22/9/2023)
Fig. 1.8 Extracted Puzzle pieces (22/9/2023)
Fig. 1.9 Extracted Puzzle pieces (22/9/2023)
Week 5
During the class, we were tasked to place our key artworks on the
tshirt, to check the overall outlook. I need to refine the edges of
curved line more smoother.
Fig. 1.10 Extracted Puzzle pieces (4/10/2023)
After refinement, I had to do further exploration for collateral.
I research on the puzzle pieces and studied their placement.
For the colour, I want to find Red and its contrast colours
because red is primary colour and commonly found in puzzle logos.
Fig 1.11 Expansion First Attempt (6/10/2023)
However, when I placed random puzzle pieces around the key
artwork, I find that it is messy and unable to focus on the
artwork
Fig 1.12 Expansion Second Attempt (6/10/2023)
Fig 1.13 Expansion Third Attempt (6/10/2023)
For the second and third attempts, I ignored mini puzzle
pieces. I make the key artworks into single puzzle pieces
and duplicate them to form a huge puzzle
Fig 1.14 Expansion Fourth Attempt (6/10/2023)
This is the final expansion of the key artwork. I choose
yellow for the duplicated puzzle pieces because the key
artwork is outstanding,
Using the expansion, we have to create the mock designs
such as tote bag or t-shirt and uploaded onto Instagram
account.
For the mock designs, I choose
Keychain, Tote Bag and Phone cases.
After finishing the collateral designs, I create
multiple layout for instagram posts.
I want to make my self-portrait into puzzle pieces,
hence I cut them down into 4 pieces and placed 'S' 'JI'
'N' separately. Since letter 'E' represents my confusion
and solution, I explored in two different style ;
1. Transform letter E to my portrait
2. Cut the letter E from the portrait.
Fig 1.16 Instagram layout exploration (7/10/2023)
After the feedback session, I develop the collateral designs
by playing with the sizes and adding extra mock up designs.
Fig 1.17 Phone case mock up (13/10/2023)
Phone case, I explored by adding extra phone cases by side or
aligned them diagonally. Personally, I find that first and
second designs seems confusing due to the pattern of the phone
cases, hence, I decided to stick with third layout.
Fig 1.18 Tote bag mock up (13/10/2023)
For the tote bags, I lied down the tote bag and duplicate the
images.
Fig 1.19 key chain mock up Ver 1 (13/10/2023)
Fig 1.20 key chain mock up Ver 2 (13/10/2023)
For the keychains, I duplicate and aligned them side by
side. But I think that it is distracting the attention and
the layout is similar to tote bag and phone case, hence, I
just place the keychain in the middle, add small pieces of
puzzles and apply gaussian blur.
Fig 1.21 Instagram layout exploration 2 (13/10/2023)
I also did further exploration for alignment of the collateral
images. As my theme is puzzle. I decided to to make the
image into the puzzle pieces.
Fig 1.22 Screen shot of Instagram (13/10/2023)
Key artwork Animation
For the first attempt, I just slide in the all letters to form
into a single puzzle.
Fig 1.23 Key Animation Ver 1 (15/10/2023)
However, I find that the animation seems boring and not
impactful.
After doing some research, I found that the most of the
puzzle animations are dropping the puzzle pieces from the
top.Hence, I decided to animate letter 'S' and 'JIN'
by dropping them from the top.
Fig 1.24 Key Animation Ver 2 (15/10/2023)
I animate them by playing the scale and opacity
For second attempt, I was satisfied with the drop down
animation, but I find that I can play with letter 'E' to give
more interesting and impactful animations.
Since 'E' represents my confusion and solutions, I animate it
by popping out from outside, and being kicked by letter 'S'.
Also remind to hold 2-3 second at the end to avoid loop the
animation too fast
Final Submission
Instagram link :
https://www.instagram.com/s_jin.puzzle/
Fig 2.1 Key Artwork - Black and White jpeg
(20/10/2023)
Fig 2.2 Key Artwork - Colour jpeg (20/10/2023)
Fig 2.3 Key Artwork - Reverse Colour jpeg
(20/10/2023)
Fig 2.4 Key Artwork - Animation gif
(20/10/2023)
Fig 2.4 Key Artwork - Colour
Palette (20/10/2023)
Fig 2.8 Collateral - Key
Chain (20/10/2023)
Fig 2.9 Collateral - Phone case
(20/10/2023)
Fig 2.10 Collateral - Tote bag
(20/10/2023)
Fig 2.11 Screen shot of Instagram
(20/10/2023)
FEEDBACK
Week 4
General Feedback: recognize the typeface to make it not too
cluttered and more readable.
Specific Feedback : Acceptable, but when I use the 'puzzled'
personality, try to provide suggestion to solve the puzzle
Week 5
Specific feedback : make the curved for letter S edges more
smoother, move letter E slightly to the left, closer on the S
Week 6
General Feedback : Need to expend the design, not just
pasting key artwork. Use the colour that easily recognise
and outstanding, not pale colour
Specific Feedback : Colour script is okay, but for the mock
design, think what you want to sell.
Week 7
General Feedback : For the collateral design, we can add more
dynamic angles rather than placing one single image, for the
self-portrait photo, we need to shoot professional and be creative
when design the layout for instagram.
Specific Feedback : Layout is okay, but need improve on collateral
because the layout seems boring.
I enjoyed this task but challenging in designing process, especially
mock up designs. At first, it was hard to find my identity and create
unique designs that different from other students. However, when I
confirm my topic, the process was smooth and fun.
Observation
During the collateral and design the layout for the instagram, I just
placed the mock up images center because I think that it is clean and
catch the attention. However, I realised that it looks boring and there
are various placement that I can experiment on. By changing the
position, it produced different mood. Also, even though I duplicate
multiple mock images, I can still make the object focus by adjusting the
direction.
Findings
FURTHER READING
Fig 4.1 Cover page
Fig 4.2
Fig 4.3
Also, letter 'P' is the only form that has visual elements and use
the serif fonts to other letters and just make the adjustment of the
layout. Instead of designing the whole letterform, choosing the one
letter is simple and strong in visual.
Fig 4.4
Fig 4.5
Another example is from kitkat. The first logotype was referencing the characteristic of gills sans, and continued with its simplicity and become iconic logo world wide.



















































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